Is the intent of the rule that nothing leaves the pit box because of Saftey. YES. So how is some one carring a gas can or draging a jack a saftey issue? When a rule is written there is the intent of the rule and the letter of the rule. Here the intent is that no car go back on the track with any equipment. But the rule says can not leave the box so NASCAR in there obsession of controling EVERY THING takes a kid driving his heart out and slams him into the pavement. Im not saying he would have one, nor do I care, but he should have had the chance to lose it on the track not to some pea brained NASCAR official. "O "also I am sure DW is fine with that just like his brother buying his way into the race. Did he really think he would finish the race in a D. Cope car? I was really excited about Toyota coming in but the Waltrip boys are changing my mind fast. But it was still a good finish to the race. I am glad Lou won maybe its my turn now! What you think Lou?
Is the intent of the rule that nothing leaves the pit box because of Saftey. (Please reword, it is confusing at best. Add question mark too.)YES. So how is some one (this is a compound word) carring (spelling: carrying) a gas can or draging (short vowel+ consonant = double the consonant before adding -ing)a jack a saftey issue? When a rule is written((,) there is the intent of the rule and the letter of the rule. Here the intent is that no car (can) go back on the track with any equipment. But the rule says (a driver) can not (cannot is one word) leave the box (end sentence here- it is a run-on) so NASCAR in there obsession of controling EVERY THING (one word) takes a kid driving his heart out and slams him into the pavement. Im (add ') not saying he would have one, nor do I care, (,)but he should have had the chance to lose it on the track(-) not to some pea brained NASCAR official. "O(h), "also I am sure DW is fine with that just like his brother buying his way into the race. (huh?) Did he really think he would finish the race in a D. Cope car? (double huh?) I was really excited about Toyota coming in but the Waltrip boys are changing my mind fast. But (Eliminated but) it was still a good finish to the race. I am glad Lou won(.)maybe its my turn now! What you think Lou? (what's with the semicolons?)
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Yeh, and this time they chose to stick to the rules but when its tony or some other idiot that shouldnt be out there its ok......"hes the champ from last year we cant penalize him" .......NASCAR doesnt know how to enforce the rules properly EVERYTIME, like the carl edwards deal when he dropped below the line at dega (i think it was) to avoid the wreck and passed 2 slow cars he would have passed anyways...they were going to pit road, and NASCAR holds him a lap for dodging a wreck.....They need to get back to the rules the way they're written, everytime....................And Im not so sure that someone bit*hing( not sure if that words allowed) about NASCAR's rules is exactly something fifth graders shuld be correctin....................Just give em a movie.......thats what the cool teachers do
What you think Lou? 
.......NASCAR doesnt know how to enforce the rules properly EVERYTIME, like the carl edwards deal when he dropped below the line at dega (i think it was) to avoid the wreck and passed 2 slow cars he would have passed anyways...they were going to pit road, and NASCAR holds him a lap for dodging a wreck.....They need to get back to the rules the way they're written, everytime....................And Im not so sure that someone bit*hing( not sure if that words allowed) about NASCAR's rules is exactly something fifth graders shuld be correctin....................Just give em a movie.......thats what the cool teachers do
